Wednesday, February 18, 2015

IOC (I'm Outwardly Crying)


Criterion A: 6
My claims were supported by the text but I thought they lacked the depth to make them qualify as strong knowledge.
Criterion B: 4 
I feel like I didn't analyze the literary features of the text well and stuck to mostly plot points to make my argument, and didn't consider how they affect the reader much/at all.
Criterion C: 3-4
I think my monologue was decently well organized and followed the structure I set up for it in my opening statement. 
Criterion D: 3
I could have used a more sophisticated and diverse vocabulary to seem more articulate and help advance my points better, I also had some awkward pauses. 

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